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by mayberry on December 6, 2009

For homework, Jo had to write a funny story about a bear. The result:

Once a bear fell out of a tree. He landed on a bag of gummy bears. He was furious that someone would turn baby bears into gummy candy. So he started a petition with Fox to eat gummy worms not gummy bears. The worms were not happy, but that’s their problem.

Not bad. Not bad at all.

{ 9 comments… read them below or add one }

Lady M December 6, 2009 at 11:01 pm

A petition? That’s awesome. She can get a writing job any day now.

Michelle December 7, 2009 at 11:04 am

“but that is their problem” won my heart!

patois December 7, 2009 at 12:38 pm

I would sign that petition. And “furious” as a word choice? Fab!

Jennifer December 7, 2009 at 3:59 pm

I love it!

Christibear December 7, 2009 at 4:36 pm

Thank your kiddo for me, I really needed the laugh. How precious!

nonlineargirl December 7, 2009 at 7:53 pm

I like it!

Fourth Breakfast December 7, 2009 at 8:39 pm

Awesome!

Oktree December 10, 2009 at 9:11 am

Brilliant!

Julie @ The Mom Slant December 10, 2009 at 7:44 pm

I love it. Sucks to be a worm, huh?

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